COMMENTS WELCOME!!! I'd love to know what you guys think.
I'm not exactly sure I'll be using this as a prologue for my book, (I'll be twisting it around a LOT if I do) but whatever I do end up doing I would seriously LOVE any comments/opinions/critiques!
**All my literature posts are still works in progress, ignore the length. The chapter divisions are all improv at the moment (I have 39 pages, no chapters yet, so I'm just going with the flow here).
**All my works are to be credited to Cranberry413
**LINK TO CHAPTER 1: [link]