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Remember when.

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You told me it wasn't working out.
Said you were going on a trip,
that we'd work everything out
when you got back.

I just about died
when you left town that day.

But you broke my heart
when you never came back to me.
I'm falling apart
with a broken heart.

I thought we were in love.

Can't believe I was cryin' over you
for so long.

I should have cried myself a river
and built myself a bridge,
gotten over you.

I know we'll meet again,
it's called destiny.

But right now
I'm trying to find my way,
a path

Something that will tell me
where I'm going,
what I'm doing
in this life of mine.

Because I know I lost my plan along the way.

I thought we were in love,
instead you broke my heart.

When I saw you on the street in LA
I felt the strangest thing:
Pure love
and
the deepest hate.

At the same time.

I was barely breathing,
in so much pain.

I swear you saw me,
cause you started my way.
And it's not like me
to turn away.

But you'll never see me again.
You broke my heart.

You broke my heart,
but now it's your's that breaking.
Breaking into a million
tiny pieces.

All you wanted was
a second chance.

That's the only thing
I ever wanted,
but you made me feel
so small inside.

I'm barely holding on.

You left me behind.

Hanging on
to those beautiful memories.

You left me here alone.
You told me it wasn't working out.

Said you were going on a trip.
But you never came back.

But you never came back.

Why'd you do it?
I thought we were

In love.
Credit me. Thanks :)

I wrote this a loonnnggg time ago. It's not based off of anything I've personally experienced. And it's probably really bad. I think this is actually one of the few I'll edit a billion times before I'm semi happy with it. ^^;

Critiques are fantastic. Tear it apart!
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Laeneris's avatar
I was just thinking of how this would make a great song when I saw the category it's in. :D It seems like a love song but to me it's not actually sweet, but more aimed at some kind of vengeance or retribution. Just my thoughts. :meow:

My favourite lines:

I should have cried myself a river
and built myself a bridge,
gotten over you.

:heart: